Total Pageviews

Monday, May 21, 2012

This Haiku Pines May 21, 2012

More than a year now
and still the core pines for love
I sit here, unloved, undone.

Emptiness dulls it
beating core sounds mechanical
"you must emerge" it calls.

Love the unloved
pump in life and make it alive
the pining disappears.

11 comments:

  1. Lovely lines ...
    http://anu-dailypost.blogspot.in/2012/05/pine.html

    ReplyDelete
  2. i can feel that very feeling... sailing in the same boat buddy...but pining could also inspire such bful words.. grt work..

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Thank you Jas.. we would certainly sail through this.

      Delete
  3. Nice pining thoughts ~ Just a small suggestion though that in writing haiku, you must be concrete in your images, rather than in abstract like this:

    empty vase
    pining for flowers,
    one year now

    Hope you don't mind ~ Smiles ~

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Thanks a lot Grace for the suggestion... duly noted.. :-) :-)

      Delete
  4. Amamzingly brilliant Tarun,.This one is the best that I have read today!

    ReplyDelete
  5. Hmmm... I so understand this. We are all in the same league I think. Loneliness, perfectly expressed in words.

    ReplyDelete