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Friday, August 31, 2012

Drawbridge Haiku

My eager eyes wait
as you stand across the bridge
when will it come down?


Inspired by the theme at



Daily prompt - Drawbridge

29 comments:

  1. Ah, an age old question. When will it come down? Nicely done.

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    1. yes, indeed, an age old question as the lover waits...

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  2. Good day Tarun, a haiku which brought a smile upon my face. Well done ... love the way you have used the prompt. Have a good September Heights.

    Namaste

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  3. I liked it a lot...but then there is hope..it may come down..have a look what I have to say..that too happens...

    http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2012/08/wounded-walls-feel-safe.html#comment-form

    RS:)

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    1. Yours is at a very different level sir... loved it..

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  4. Good one Tarun..romance reloaded here :-)

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  5. you caught so much in these lines--beautiful.

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  6. when will it come down? Loved it!

    Someone is Special

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  7. Very Hopeful.
    I especially liked the sequence: Hope-love-hope. =)

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  9. A nice sense of impatience comes through here.

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  10. how will you 'bridge' the gap!?

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  11. Ah, these things take time, you know. Nice one, Tarun.

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  12. Anticipation ~~~ ahh, keeps the sparks flying!!
    DrawBridge

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  13. I suppose so too - bridges should start coming down so all of us can get on building good relationships.

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