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Friday, May 4, 2012

Hour Haiku May 5, 2012

On death bed
calmly you lay and
stare and embrace

The last hour
brings the buried faces
can you name?

The last hour
arrives and you reflect back
on your actions

Carefully
you recollect the pieces
karma

The karma puzzle
you put the pieces for hereafter
and the next lifetime.
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26 comments:

  1. PranitaMay 4, 2012 at 10:30 PM

    Beautiful! Insightful Haiku.. Very nice :)
    The happy hours countdown begins!

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  2. AnonymousMay 4, 2012 at 10:44 PM

    Ahhh...lovely mate....up n close 2 d End

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  3. Ramesh SoodMay 4, 2012 at 11:18 PM

    This is wisdom sprinkled..here..thanks!!

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  4. ChèvrefeuilleMay 5, 2012 at 3:10 AM

    Wonderfully crafted spiritual poem. Love the read of this series of haiku. Thank you for sharing.

    Namaste

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  5. GraceMay 5, 2012 at 3:59 AM

    This is beautiful haiku form...I specially like the collecting of karma ~ Well done ~

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  6. PattiKenMay 5, 2012 at 4:36 AM

    Collecting karma for the next life. What a lovely thought.

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  7. carol l mckennaMay 5, 2012 at 5:32 AM

    Powerful haiku of thoughts 'of the final hour' ~ well crafted ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  8. AnonymousMay 5, 2012 at 1:45 PM

    we won't know how Karma really works till we die


    spring haiku and tanka

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    1. Tarun MazumdarMay 5, 2012 at 8:17 PM

      I believe the concept of karma is simple... cause and effect... so by reflecting on our actions we can come to know what is going to pass on in the next lifetime...

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  9. AnonymousMay 5, 2012 at 9:45 PM

    Very insightful Tarun. Thank you for sharing.

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  10. Sri ValliMay 6, 2012 at 6:05 AM

    Slowly you recollect the pieces of karma....Beautiful words...and lovely set :)

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  11. Jaideep RaoMay 6, 2012 at 8:51 AM

    This is incredible, superlike for each and every word and the deep thought!

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  12. SuzyMay 7, 2012 at 1:46 AM

    Spiritual and profound - a nice reminder that karma here is karma there. Nicely done.
    Someday Somewhere Haiku - Spring and Hour

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  13. ChèvrefeuilleMay 8, 2012 at 4:15 AM

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  14. AnonymousMay 8, 2012 at 3:21 PM

    Very nice ~~ thank you for sharing with us!
    Bewitching Hour

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  15. UnknownMay 26, 2012 at 11:55 AM

    the underlying philosophy can change the world for better, if only we listen. Amazing work!

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