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Friday, May 4, 2012

Hour Haiku May 5, 2012

On death bed
calmly you lay and
stare and embrace

The last hour
brings the buried faces
can you name?

The last hour
arrives and you reflect back
on your actions

Carefully
you recollect the pieces
karma

The karma puzzle
you put the pieces for hereafter
and the next lifetime.

26 comments:

  1. Ahhh...lovely mate....up n close 2 d End

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  2. This is wisdom sprinkled..here..thanks!!

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  3. Wonderfully crafted spiritual poem. Love the read of this series of haiku. Thank you for sharing.

    Namaste

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  4. This is beautiful haiku form...I specially like the collecting of karma ~ Well done ~

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  5. Collecting karma for the next life. What a lovely thought.

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  6. Powerful haiku of thoughts 'of the final hour' ~ well crafted ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  7. we won't know how Karma really works till we die


    spring haiku and tanka

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    1. I believe the concept of karma is simple... cause and effect... so by reflecting on our actions we can come to know what is going to pass on in the next lifetime...

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  8. Very insightful Tarun. Thank you for sharing.

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  9. Slowly you recollect the pieces of karma....Beautiful words...and lovely set :)

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  10. This is incredible, superlike for each and every word and the deep thought!

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  11. Spiritual and profound - a nice reminder that karma here is karma there. Nicely done.
    Someday Somewhere Haiku - Spring and Hour

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  13. Very nice ~~ thank you for sharing with us!
    Bewitching Hour

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  14. the underlying philosophy can change the world for better, if only we listen. Amazing work!

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