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Saturday, June 23, 2012

Support Haiku June 23, 2012

Mahogany tree
now chopped meticulously
guitarist's solo.

27 comments:

  1. Nice...how about a guitarist's song ~

    The tree is an excellent metaphor for many things ~

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  2. thanks Grace... yes guitarist's song is a good option.. but this guitarist wish to take a solo here... smiles.. tree is indeed a fine metaphor...

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  3. Wow--deep, beautiful, and musical--well done!

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  4. amazing haiku ~ lots of meaning here ~~ thanks, ^_^ (A Creative Harbor)

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  5. Karmic...the tree becomes the melody.

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  6. I can be a bit obtuse when it comes to metaphors, but this one I think I got! lovely words made me smile

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  7. Lovely haiku. Really enjoyed it. It made me smile.

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  8. I wonder if the guitarist's solo brings the joy of music or the sadness of the tree, being cut down for that solo. :) Nature is supporting music.. quite true.

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    1. I guess joy.. because the guitarist planted ten more mahogany trees... :)

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  9. An interesting take on the prompt. Nicely done.

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  10. Loved this take.. How one person's loss/misery might bring music/joy into another's!
    Quest of the unknown.

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  11. Tarun, very nice interpretation, was just wondering how will it sound if you put 'soul' instead of solo, awesome :)

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    1. hey Jaideep even I thought of soul but then the guitarist told me he wants a solo here.. smiles..

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  12. Wow, so little, yet full of meaning! Wonderful!

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  13. Very interesting and thoughtful haiku! :)

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  14. beautiful! tree symbolizes life here :)

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  15. This works beautifully. Guitar reference is subtle, yet not.

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