Nice...how about a guitarist's song ~The tree is an excellent metaphor for many things ~
thanks Grace... yes guitarist's song is a good option.. but this guitarist wish to take a solo here... smiles.. tree is indeed a fine metaphor...
Wow--deep, beautiful, and musical--well done!
thanks susan
amazing haiku ~ lots of meaning here ~~ thanks, ^_^ (A Creative Harbor)
thanks carol
Karmic...the tree becomes the melody.
yes.. :-) thanks
I can be a bit obtuse when it comes to metaphors, but this one I think I got! lovely words made me smile
thanks Joanne
Lovely haiku. Really enjoyed it. It made me smile.
Thanks ND!
I wonder if the guitarist's solo brings the joy of music or the sadness of the tree, being cut down for that solo. :) Nature is supporting music.. quite true.
I guess joy.. because the guitarist planted ten more mahogany trees... :)
Loved the irony of this poem
thanks Green Speck
An interesting take on the prompt. Nicely done.
Loved this take.. How one person's loss/misery might bring music/joy into another's!Quest of the unknown.
thanks Pranita
Tarun, very nice interpretation, was just wondering how will it sound if you put 'soul' instead of solo, awesome :)
hey Jaideep even I thought of soul but then the guitarist told me he wants a solo here.. smiles..
Wow, so little, yet full of meaning! Wonderful!
well thats haiku for you... :-)
Very interesting and thoughtful haiku! :)
beautiful! tree symbolizes life here :)
This works beautifully. Guitar reference is subtle, yet not.
Nice...how about a guitarist's song ~
ReplyDeleteThe tree is an excellent metaphor for many things ~
thanks Grace... yes guitarist's song is a good option.. but this guitarist wish to take a solo here... smiles.. tree is indeed a fine metaphor...
ReplyDeleteWow--deep, beautiful, and musical--well done!
ReplyDeletethanks susan
Deleteamazing haiku ~ lots of meaning here ~~ thanks, ^_^ (A Creative Harbor)
ReplyDeletethanks carol
DeleteKarmic...the tree becomes the melody.
ReplyDeleteyes.. :-) thanks
DeleteI can be a bit obtuse when it comes to metaphors, but this one I think I got! lovely words made me smile
ReplyDeletethanks Joanne
DeleteLovely haiku. Really enjoyed it. It made me smile.
ReplyDeleteThanks ND!
DeleteI wonder if the guitarist's solo brings the joy of music or the sadness of the tree, being cut down for that solo. :) Nature is supporting music.. quite true.
ReplyDeleteI guess joy.. because the guitarist planted ten more mahogany trees... :)
DeleteLoved the irony of this poem
ReplyDeletethanks Green Speck
DeleteAn interesting take on the prompt. Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteLoved this take.. How one person's loss/misery might bring music/joy into another's!
ReplyDeleteQuest of the unknown.
thanks Pranita
DeleteTarun, very nice interpretation, was just wondering how will it sound if you put 'soul' instead of solo, awesome :)
ReplyDeletehey Jaideep even I thought of soul but then the guitarist told me he wants a solo here.. smiles..
DeleteWow, so little, yet full of meaning! Wonderful!
ReplyDeletewell thats haiku for you... :-)
DeleteVery interesting and thoughtful haiku! :)
ReplyDeletebeautiful! tree symbolizes life here :)
ReplyDeleteThis works beautifully. Guitar reference is subtle, yet not.
ReplyDelete