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Saturday, June 2, 2012

Haiku June 02, 2012

You came to unlock
metamorphosis began
the new I stand here.

(For a very dear person in my life, thank you so much.)

You enter inside
I turn you repeatedly
wrong keys and failure.

(Happens all the time.)

for: http://haiku-heights.blogspot.in/ and http://corazon.typepad.com/recuerda_mi_corazon/haiku/ (also known as Haiku my heart)
prompt: Lock

35 comments:

  1. Wow... beautiful.. life always has a lot of wrong keys... things go wrong, we fail,, but only til d right one comes along! :)
    When waves transport to the new shore

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    1. Thanks a lot Pranita.. for the kind words

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  2. That's it. Maybe I'll try a different key. Thanks for sharing your Haiku

    Peace

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    1. ha ha spadoman thanks a lot for visiting..

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  3. It's like a never-ending key ring, Tarun. Trial and error is good :)

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    1. Yes Leo it is through trial and error that one learns.. thank you

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  4. Lovely thoughts on changing and finding the "right" key ~

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    1. absolutely finding the right key is pivotal....

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  5. Beautiful thoughts....Lovely haiku!

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  6. Tarun,
    both so evocative even in the polarity of experience. thank you for being here at haiku my heart. i hope you will never stop!

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    1. thank you Rebecca... I will never stop Haiku is like my first love..

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  7. awww I loved this <3 it has my blog name yet it some how relates me too... :):):) <3 made my day :)

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    1. thanks for the lovely comment Maharukh.. :)

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  8. Beautiful haiku ~ many messages ~ ...metamorphsis began... how wonderful! ~ thanks, ^_^

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    1. Thanks ArtmuseDog and Carol glad you liked them...

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  9. Someone else can really help to change you....It happened to me.....and in the 2nd haiku, it felt as if you were helping change someone else......nice work

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    1. Thank you Joanne.. the second one is me trying to open my front door ha ha ha... but yes if the reader is interpreting in numerous ways, I as a poet have done my job....

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  10. Yeah true Tarun, we end up most of the time finding the right key, happy weekend!

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  11. Thanks a lot Jaideep that is what life is about finding the right key... happy weekend to u too

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  12. Very intriguing words that really make me think about your haikus and their relevance to unlocking my own life.

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    1. I am glad that I was able to stir some thoughts in your heart... thanks a lot

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  13. you never know whether you find the right key until you attempt to unlock the lock.

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  14. Love the thought in your haiku. I think it's alright to have failures - that's how we learn. It shows that you have lived.

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    1. I have lived but still there is a long way to go my friend... thanks

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  15. what beauty!! loved both of them..glad I visited your post :)

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  16. Wow, such wonderful and true provoking haiku... wrong keys, don't we all have a bunch of those?

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    1. Thank you Marit! Indeed we have a bunch of wrong keys but it is we who put them in our key rings!

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  17. Hey Tarun ...
    its wonderful ...
    i liked 1st one
    Thanks for sharing ...

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  18. The first one is so sweet. And the second is deep! Loved both of them! :)

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