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Saturday, June 2, 2012

Haiku June 02, 2012

You came to unlock
metamorphosis began
the new I stand here.

(For a very dear person in my life, thank you so much.)

You enter inside
I turn you repeatedly
wrong keys and failure.

(Happens all the time.)

for: http://haiku-heights.blogspot.in/ and http://corazon.typepad.com/recuerda_mi_corazon/haiku/ (also known as Haiku my heart)
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35 comments:

  1. PranitaJune 2, 2012 at 2:38 AM

    Wow... beautiful.. life always has a lot of wrong keys... things go wrong, we fail,, but only til d right one comes along! :)
    When waves transport to the new shore

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  2. SpadomanJune 2, 2012 at 3:30 AM

    That's it. Maybe I'll try a different key. Thanks for sharing your Haiku

    Peace

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  3. Vinay Leo R.June 2, 2012 at 4:17 AM

    It's like a never-ending key ring, Tarun. Trial and error is good :)

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    1. Tarun MazumdarJune 2, 2012 at 9:38 AM

      Yes Leo it is through trial and error that one learns.. thank you

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  4. GraceJune 2, 2012 at 4:44 AM

    Lovely thoughts on changing and finding the "right" key ~

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    1. Tarun MazumdarJune 2, 2012 at 9:44 AM

      absolutely finding the right key is pivotal....

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  5. Sri ValliJune 2, 2012 at 4:49 AM

    Beautiful thoughts....Lovely haiku!

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  6. rebeccaJune 2, 2012 at 5:54 AM

    Tarun,
    both so evocative even in the polarity of experience. thank you for being here at haiku my heart. i hope you will never stop!

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    1. Tarun MazumdarJune 2, 2012 at 9:39 AM

      thank you Rebecca... I will never stop Haiku is like my first love..

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  7. NAWALJune 2, 2012 at 6:00 AM

    awww I loved this <3 it has my blog name yet it some how relates me too... :):):) <3 made my day :)

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  8. carol l mckennaJune 2, 2012 at 7:30 AM

    Beautiful haiku ~ many messages ~ ...metamorphsis began... how wonderful! ~ thanks, ^_^

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    1. Tarun MazumdarJune 2, 2012 at 9:42 AM

      Thanks ArtmuseDog and Carol glad you liked them...

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  9. joanneJune 2, 2012 at 7:33 AM

    Someone else can really help to change you....It happened to me.....and in the 2nd haiku, it felt as if you were helping change someone else......nice work

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    1. Tarun MazumdarJune 2, 2012 at 9:43 AM

      Thank you Joanne.. the second one is me trying to open my front door ha ha ha... but yes if the reader is interpreting in numerous ways, I as a poet have done my job....

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  10. MeriJune 2, 2012 at 8:17 AM

    Interesting pairing. . .

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  11. Jaideep RaoJune 2, 2012 at 10:11 AM

    Yeah true Tarun, we end up most of the time finding the right key, happy weekend!

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  12. Tarun MazumdarJune 2, 2012 at 10:56 AM

    Thanks a lot Jaideep that is what life is about finding the right key... happy weekend to u too

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  13. AnonymousJune 2, 2012 at 12:54 PM

    Very intriguing words that really make me think about your haikus and their relevance to unlocking my own life.

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    1. Tarun MazumdarJune 2, 2012 at 8:31 PM

      I am glad that I was able to stir some thoughts in your heart... thanks a lot

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  14. Irene RafaelJune 2, 2012 at 4:32 PM

    you never know whether you find the right key until you attempt to unlock the lock.

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  15. AnonymousJune 2, 2012 at 8:03 PM

    Love the thought in your haiku. I think it's alright to have failures - that's how we learn. It shows that you have lived.

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    1. Tarun MazumdarJune 2, 2012 at 8:33 PM

      I have lived but still there is a long way to go my friend... thanks

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  16. Sanjana June 2, 2012 at 11:49 PM

    what beauty!! loved both of them..glad I visited your post :)

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  17. MaritJune 3, 2012 at 2:03 AM

    Wow, such wonderful and true provoking haiku... wrong keys, don't we all have a bunch of those?

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    1. Tarun MazumdarJune 3, 2012 at 2:18 AM

      Thank you Marit! Indeed we have a bunch of wrong keys but it is we who put them in our key rings!

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  18. Anu ~*~June 3, 2012 at 4:41 AM

    Hey Tarun ...
    its wonderful ...
    i liked 1st one
    Thanks for sharing ...

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  19. AmberJune 4, 2012 at 11:25 AM

    The first one is so sweet. And the second is deep! Loved both of them! :)

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