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Thursday, April 26, 2012

Temptation Haiku, April 27 2012

The wanting
It creeps in slowly
She is unaware.

The majestic black kohl
Around those eyes, as they tempt me
Will you let me drown?
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14 comments:

  1. Jaideep RaoApril 26, 2012 at 11:35 AM

    "let me drown",surprised to read last line..good one!

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  2. PranitaApril 26, 2012 at 11:37 AM

    Said like a Romeo... :) Beautiful.. If she reads this, she will surely let you drown ;)

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  3. Uma AnandaneApril 26, 2012 at 12:20 PM

    Lovely lines !

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  4. SurbhiApril 26, 2012 at 12:26 PM

    b'fully crafted ... tarun ..:)

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  5. Yellow TulipApril 26, 2012 at 1:03 PM

    Catchy yet elegant line!...

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  6. GraceApril 26, 2012 at 4:16 PM

    I like the set specially the second one...You are getting the handle of this form ~ Nice ~

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  7. ElleceeApril 26, 2012 at 4:47 PM

    I enjoyed your haiku today. I like your last line "Will you let me drown?" I hope she doesn't :-)

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  8. carol l mckennaApril 26, 2012 at 5:22 PM

    Awesome ~ powerful haiku ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  9. PattiKenApril 26, 2012 at 6:44 PM

    That was a great last line. Nice.

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  10. UnknownApril 26, 2012 at 9:55 PM

    Beautiful, I just hope she does!

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  11. Tarun MazumdarApril 27, 2012 at 11:05 AM

    thank you all for the appreciation

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  12. CYNOSUREApril 27, 2012 at 11:47 AM

    lovely...beautifully written... :)

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