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Thursday, April 26, 2012

Temptation Haiku, April 27 2012

The wanting
It creeps in slowly
She is unaware.

The majestic black kohl
Around those eyes, as they tempt me
Will you let me drown?

14 comments:

  1. "let me drown",surprised to read last line..good one!

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  2. Said like a Romeo... :) Beautiful.. If she reads this, she will surely let you drown ;)

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  3. b'fully crafted ... tarun ..:)

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  4. I like the set specially the second one...You are getting the handle of this form ~ Nice ~

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  5. I enjoyed your haiku today. I like your last line "Will you let me drown?" I hope she doesn't :-)

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  6. Awesome ~ powerful haiku ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  7. That was a great last line. Nice.

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  8. Beautiful, I just hope she does!

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  9. thank you all for the appreciation

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  10. lovely...beautifully written... :)

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