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Saturday, April 21, 2012

Still Haiku, April 22, 2012

Thoughtless state
Distorted ideas die
Still water

Still water
Pristine and clear
I long for

I long for
The state of stillness
Calm yet awake.

14 comments:

  1. i loved this of the magnanimity of yearning here.. a prayer for pristine and clear yet still water..rarity but not impossible...

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    1. I want to get into that state... thanks for liking it... cheers

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  2. Very nice weaving haiku...I think you are getting the form ~

    Keep it up ~

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    1. Thank you Grace for clearing the form.. Your last example made things clear...

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  3. prayer for pristine and clear yet still water..loved this line!

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  4. Peaceful haiku ~ lovely ~thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  5. "Calm yet Awake"...wonderful... :)

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  6. A peaceful and still haiku. Lovely done.

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  7. I love the imagery of the third haiku - a state of stillness - calm yet awake - I must confess i find this hard to hold onto in my crazy life - so peaceful

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    1. If we try we can achieve that state.. I am trying hard too

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