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Friday, April 20, 2012

Renovation Haiku, April 20, 2012

Damage is done
will I win?
what is lost

Faith is the key
to win
what is lost

Look inside
ponder and transform
the core

Words are meaningless
as they come
only to fade

Prayer and action
to innovate
to renovate.

2 comments:

  1. Nice thoughts...If you want the 3-5-3 syllabic count, it goes like this:

    look inside (3)
    ponder your mistakes, (5)
    change the core (3)

    For the 5-7-5 syllabic count, it goes like this:

    words are meaningless,
    they come like cherry blossoms,
    fading in the sun

    Hope you don't mind ~

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    1. Thanks a lot Grace... I will rework on my haiku...
      Thank you for the guidance.

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