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Monday, September 3, 2012

Moon Haiku

Moon on the river
and I think about your face
I remember you.

My heart screams out loud
your name, it needs you badly
unbearable pain.


Inspired by the theme at

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6 comments:

  1. Amrit SinhaSeptember 3, 2012 at 11:11 AM

    A heartbreaking tale well written !!!

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  2. ChèvrefeuilleSeptember 3, 2012 at 2:11 PM

    Heartbraking set of haiku ... would have suited well at the loneliness prompt yesterday.

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  3. ElleceeSeptember 3, 2012 at 3:59 PM

    Oh my, I can feel this one. Beautifully done.

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  4. PattiKenSeptember 3, 2012 at 5:35 PM

    This is filled with such longing. Very nice.

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  5. Magical Mystical TeacherSeptember 4, 2012 at 5:33 AM

    It's amazing what the moon brings to mind...

    Pursuing the Moon


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  6. Vinay Leo R.September 4, 2012 at 11:14 AM

    Longing.. sad.. heartfelt. You got the moonlight to life.

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