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Thursday, September 13, 2012

Revelation Haiku

His nice demeanor
nicely laced with fake wisdom
unleash the devil.

To misunderstanding and assumptions.

Apologies for the ugly haiku. State of mind - Pathetic.

11 comments:

  1. Wow... strong words!! Better words than actions sometimes!

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  2. But then you find so many of them and come face to face too... lovleu haiku..

    RS:)

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  3. This haiku has his own face ,,, a bit ugly in the chosen words I think, but through that choice of words ... so beautifully composed. I love the way you are writing your haiku ... nothing to apologize for ... it's your haiku with a feeling within in that's only your's. I am just a reader and maybe ... I see a different image ... or don't think the words chosen are ugly.

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  4. No apologies necessary, Tarun. I liked it a lot, especially "nicely laced with fake wisdom." We see these guys n the nightly news.

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  5. Wonder if it's meant for me :P ;) I've given suggestions here so often... could be..

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    1. Haha no no leo.. it is not meant for you or anybody... infact you helped me out with haiku...

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  6. Oh yes we do see these characters often and feel their damage as well. Well done haiku today. A strong message we are familiar with.

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  7. Fake wisdom...
    Nice!!!

    http://locomente.blogspot.in/2012/09/revelation.html

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