This haiku has his own face ,,, a bit ugly in the chosen words I think, but through that choice of words ... so beautifully composed. I love the way you are writing your haiku ... nothing to apologize for ... it's your haiku with a feeling within in that's only your's. I am just a reader and maybe ... I see a different image ... or don't think the words chosen are ugly.
Good one ~~
ReplyDeleteLove the ugly power behind this strong haiku!
ReplyDeleteEasy wings flutter to the Sun
Wow... strong words!! Better words than actions sometimes!
ReplyDeleteBut then you find so many of them and come face to face too... lovleu haiku..
ReplyDeleteRS:)
This haiku has his own face ,,, a bit ugly in the chosen words I think, but through that choice of words ... so beautifully composed. I love the way you are writing your haiku ... nothing to apologize for ... it's your haiku with a feeling within in that's only your's. I am just a reader and maybe ... I see a different image ... or don't think the words chosen are ugly.
ReplyDeleteNo apologies necessary, Tarun. I liked it a lot, especially "nicely laced with fake wisdom." We see these guys n the nightly news.
ReplyDeleteInteresting image. Nice work.
ReplyDeleteMelanie
Wonder if it's meant for me :P ;) I've given suggestions here so often... could be..
ReplyDeleteHaha no no leo.. it is not meant for you or anybody... infact you helped me out with haiku...
DeleteOh yes we do see these characters often and feel their damage as well. Well done haiku today. A strong message we are familiar with.
ReplyDeleteFake wisdom...
ReplyDeleteNice!!!
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