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Sunday, September 16, 2012

Meadow Haiku

Knight comes with his sword
Slaying and butchering them
Meadow is red.

To war.
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8 comments:

  1. PattiKenSeptember 16, 2012 at 7:00 PM

    This is such a graphic image. I know that last line isn't part of the haiku, but it works for ma.

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  2. Judith WesterfieldSeptember 16, 2012 at 8:18 PM

    Whoa! Powerful.

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  3. SayantiniSeptember 16, 2012 at 11:25 PM

    Very nice Tarun. I like the depth of this haiku:D

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  4. Amrit SinhaSeptember 17, 2012 at 12:37 AM

    Reminds me of Hollywood action movies :-)

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  5. LocomenteSeptember 17, 2012 at 2:32 AM

    Oops!!!
    But different

    http://locomente.blogspot.in/2012/09/cherished-moments.html

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  6. ChèvrefeuilleSeptember 17, 2012 at 4:04 AM

    Great take on meadow. Basho once wrote a haiku in just the same tone ... I can't bring that haiku right now, but if I have found it I will comment again on this one.

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  7. Magical Mystical TeacherSeptember 17, 2012 at 5:20 AM

    I get the bloody message!

    No Meadow

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  8. ghostomSeptember 17, 2012 at 2:22 PM

    You're bloody well write:)

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