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Sunday, September 16, 2012

Meadow Haiku

Knight comes with his sword
Slaying and butchering them
Meadow is red.

To war.

8 comments:

  1. This is such a graphic image. I know that last line isn't part of the haiku, but it works for ma.

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  2. Very nice Tarun. I like the depth of this haiku:D

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  3. Reminds me of Hollywood action movies :-)

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  4. Oops!!!
    But different

    http://locomente.blogspot.in/2012/09/cherished-moments.html

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  5. Great take on meadow. Basho once wrote a haiku in just the same tone ... I can't bring that haiku right now, but if I have found it I will comment again on this one.

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