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Sunday, September 2, 2012

Loneliness Haiku

Great behavior
are you sober when alone?
the real you stand naked.

~I~I~I~

Confined in a room
you stare inward and look beyond
now what do you see?

Inspired by the theme at
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15 comments:

  1. Amrit SinhaSeptember 2, 2012 at 6:57 AM

    Great thought !!!

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  2. UnknownSeptember 2, 2012 at 6:59 AM

    Very interesting.. A wonderful take on the duality of our lives..

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  3. NAWALSeptember 2, 2012 at 11:34 AM

    GREAT ONE!
    the real u stand naked... impact full!

    amazingly crafted!

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  4. A Hopeless RomanticSeptember 2, 2012 at 11:37 AM

    The latter Haiku is real eye opener: now what do you see?
    Thought provoking.

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  5. Susan DanielsSeptember 2, 2012 at 11:47 AM

    really made me think, these two. Well done.

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  6. MarkSeptember 2, 2012 at 11:51 AM

    Staring inward can be a startling experience!

    Loneliness of Stars

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  7. Diwakar NarayanSeptember 2, 2012 at 2:46 PM

    the first one is a bitter truth.

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  8. ElleceeSeptember 2, 2012 at 3:23 PM

    Very reflective haiku. "are you sober when alone" "you stare inward and look beyond" I wonder.

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  9. BarbaraSeptember 2, 2012 at 6:01 PM

    stare inward and look beyond...not always easy to do. Well done.

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  10. HazelSeptember 2, 2012 at 7:51 PM

    Why does this remind me of a prince lately? lol... I like that the theme is loneliness but I get to stay away from the feeling and think of something deeper, beyond.

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    1. Tarun MazumdarSeptember 3, 2012 at 7:19 AM

      Prince? I wonder why it reminds you of a prince...

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  11. Sri ValliSeptember 3, 2012 at 6:29 AM

    Beautiful set...The second one made me wonder.....

    Lonely girl

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  12. UnknownSeptember 3, 2012 at 7:00 AM

    Haiku to make one think - and go places where sometimes we'd rather not visit.

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  13. Tarun MazumdarSeptember 3, 2012 at 7:20 AM

    Thank you everyone!

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  14. ChèvrefeuilleSeptember 3, 2012 at 8:40 AM

    Wonderful and deep haiku ... love the way in which you ask your reader to think about ...

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