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Sunday, September 2, 2012

Loneliness Haiku

Great behavior
are you sober when alone?
the real you stand naked.

~I~I~I~

Confined in a room
you stare inward and look beyond
now what do you see?

Inspired by the theme at

15 comments:

  1. Very interesting.. A wonderful take on the duality of our lives..

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  2. GREAT ONE!
    the real u stand naked... impact full!

    amazingly crafted!

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  3. The latter Haiku is real eye opener: now what do you see?
    Thought provoking.

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  4. really made me think, these two. Well done.

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  5. Very reflective haiku. "are you sober when alone" "you stare inward and look beyond" I wonder.

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  6. stare inward and look beyond...not always easy to do. Well done.

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  7. Why does this remind me of a prince lately? lol... I like that the theme is loneliness but I get to stay away from the feeling and think of something deeper, beyond.

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    1. Prince? I wonder why it reminds you of a prince...

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  8. Beautiful set...The second one made me wonder.....

    Lonely girl

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  9. Haiku to make one think - and go places where sometimes we'd rather not visit.

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  10. Wonderful and deep haiku ... love the way in which you ask your reader to think about ...

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