Friday, August 31, 2012

Drawbridge Haiku

My eager eyes wait
as you stand across the bridge
when will it come down?

Inspired by the theme at



Daily prompt - Drawbridge
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29 comments:

  1. ElleceeAugust 31, 2012 at 4:52 PM

    Ah, an age old question. When will it come down? Nicely done.

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    1. Tarun MazumdarAugust 31, 2012 at 5:32 PM

      yes, indeed, an age old question as the lover waits...

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  2. ChèvrefeuilleAugust 31, 2012 at 5:10 PM

    Good day Tarun, a haiku which brought a smile upon my face. Well done ... love the way you have used the prompt. Have a good September Heights.

    Namaste

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  3. Amrit SinhaAugust 31, 2012 at 11:54 PM

    Aah ... romanticism flowing !!!

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  4. Ramesh SoodSeptember 1, 2012 at 12:58 AM

    I liked it a lot...but then there is hope..it may come down..have a look what I have to say..that too happens...

    http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2012/08/wounded-walls-feel-safe.html#comment-form

    RS:)

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    1. Tarun MazumdarSeptember 1, 2012 at 8:22 AM

      Yours is at a very different level sir... loved it..

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  5. Diwakar NarayanSeptember 1, 2012 at 4:52 AM

    Good one Tarun..romance reloaded here :-)

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  6. PranitaSeptember 1, 2012 at 7:04 AM

    Loved the haiku! Absolutely romantic!

    Creepy thorns to glistening petals

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  7. UnknownSeptember 1, 2012 at 8:07 AM

    Ahhh - such longing

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  8. Susan DanielsSeptember 1, 2012 at 8:50 AM

    you caught so much in these lines--beautiful.

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  9. Someone is SpecialSeptember 1, 2012 at 8:50 AM

    when will it come down? Loved it!

    Someone is Special

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  10. A Hopeless RomanticSeptember 1, 2012 at 9:16 AM

    Very Hopeful.
    I especially liked the sequence: Hope-love-hope. =)

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  11. Magical Mystical TeacherSeptember 1, 2012 at 9:54 AM

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  12. Magical Mystical TeacherSeptember 1, 2012 at 9:55 AM

    "When" is the unanswerable question!

    Drawbridge

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  13. AnonymousSeptember 1, 2012 at 11:14 AM

    A nice sense of impatience comes through here.

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  14. joanneSeptember 1, 2012 at 12:58 PM

    how will you 'bridge' the gap!?

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  15. PattiKenSeptember 1, 2012 at 6:00 PM

    Ah, these things take time, you know. Nice one, Tarun.

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  16. AnonymousSeptember 1, 2012 at 10:34 PM

    Anticipation ~~~ ahh, keeps the sparks flying!!
    DrawBridge

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  17. HazelSeptember 2, 2012 at 4:06 AM

    I suppose so too - bridges should start coming down so all of us can get on building good relationships.

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