Monday, April 9, 2012

Seashore Haiku version 2.0, 9th April, 2012

The waves raging up and down

As I calmly wait for my beer

Flashback and memories.

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3 comments:

  1. Vinay Leo R.April 9, 2012 at 11:19 AM

    Hi Tarun,

    Some memories stay long, don't they? Hmm..

    There is freedom in a haiku, however, it should be under 17 syllables. Yours comes up to 21 :) Please revise...

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  2. Tarun MazumdarApril 9, 2012 at 11:23 AM

    indeed they do... thanks Leo.. i will revise and upload..

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  3. ChèvrefeuilleApril 9, 2012 at 4:05 PM

    Thank you for sharing this with us. I think your new in the world of haiku. Keep on trying ... haiku looks easy, but isn't.

    Namaste

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