The buzzing sound
alerts me
honeybees attack
bite me
here and there
I beg them
leave my face
still have to walk the aisle
Still have to walk the aisle
but where is my girl?
my honeybee.
Turning from a threat to something cute! Creative!
Thanks a lot, Gemma! I am glad you like it
Sounds fun but this is not a haiku form. If you want the shortened version of 3-5-3, it goes something like this:buzzing soundhoneybees attack,red sirenHope you don't mind ~
Hey Grace...thanks a lot for the advice... only with poets like you that I will be able to master this form of poetry...Thank you so much...
Turning from a threat to something cute! Creative!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot, Gemma! I am glad you like it
DeleteSounds fun but this is not a haiku form. If you want the shortened version of 3-5-3, it goes something like this:
ReplyDeletebuzzing sound
honeybees attack,
red siren
Hope you don't mind ~
Hey Grace...
Deletethanks a lot for the advice... only with poets like you that I will be able to master this form of poetry...
Thank you so much...