Thursday, March 15, 2012

The Spring Tanka

The spring skies look at you

and smile

elements of chaos begin to hide

As you joyfully arrive like a white lily

today even the spring sun looks silly.

4 comments:

  1. it's very breezy, no complexities here. You've got a fan following in me here. Keep writing.

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  2. Wah! that's amazing, what i can say now... *bows down*

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  3. This is one of the best of the whole lot...

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  4. ah! this will always be my favorite one...

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